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Tue, Sep. 23rd, 2003 06:05 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
Advice time~! =D

Anyone with the smallest or biggest thing to improve on this lineart, say so. This is Africa for my second art prac, the final piece. This exact images (well, the much bigger Photoshop of it) will be coloured on the pooter and printed to hand over to the wonderful people at SSABSA, so absolutely anything you say to improve it will be more than helpful ^^
Seriously, it dun matter how big the thing is you want me to change. To give you an idea, the acacia to the left? The top of that was originally just below her spear, so it basically looked like she was only a meter or so shorter than the tree, which is just not natural, so I moved that up to improve the perspective a bit, so yeah, any advice whatsoever would be great ^^ Specifically the hands, hate hands, can't bloody draw them ><
Oh, and the eyeball? Not actually there, just stuck one there so she didn't look so evil. Have no fear, her eyeball won't be that crap XD;
Thankuu~!

Anyone with the smallest or biggest thing to improve on this lineart, say so. This is Africa for my second art prac, the final piece. This exact images (well, the much bigger Photoshop of it) will be coloured on the pooter and printed to hand over to the wonderful people at SSABSA, so absolutely anything you say to improve it will be more than helpful ^^
Seriously, it dun matter how big the thing is you want me to change. To give you an idea, the acacia to the left? The top of that was originally just below her spear, so it basically looked like she was only a meter or so shorter than the tree, which is just not natural, so I moved that up to improve the perspective a bit, so yeah, any advice whatsoever would be great ^^ Specifically the hands, hate hands, can't bloody draw them ><
Oh, and the eyeball? Not actually there, just stuck one there so she didn't look so evil. Have no fear, her eyeball won't be that crap XD;
Thankuu~!