I comment here as a reply to all of them, cos it'll all be much the same thing anyway, and I am lazy =D
I love your comments~ thank you so much hun <3 I know what I can do with them all now, especially Winter Dogs. I reread it myself today and felt it was a bit iffy, but couldn't quite pick why, so thanking you muchly =DD
*big scare as she's not used to LJ not working, kicks it* ...you~ lucky, lucky bastid!
Commodores are one of the most common cars in Australia, and if a car's really old and looking like it's about to blow up, we call it a bomb. People who don't like Commodores merge the two cos they're mean~ =( *has a Commodore* *called Bruce*
Aussies actually say sms? *fascinated* We're kinda half-half. Text or sms, both work. I say sms, tho =3
Though bit odd to see you write something other than 'speculative fiction'. It's even weirder WRITING it XD; I had to steal my own characters' names just so I had a bit of familiarity there ^^;
I'll get Mum to read Broken tomorrow, see how it goes down with no context. If not then I'll just scrap it. It's kinda there as a filler, cos I had two extra pages to fill (which amounts to about 500 words with the damn formatting they want) and just threw in that minific, cos I like hands~ >>;
Feel free to nick them both for Talechasing =D Broken was actually a response to something else a while ago, but there's no reason it can't go up at the comm =D
But yes, thank you soso much! I reckon I can fix all those bits now =3
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Date: Mon, Nov. 12th, 2007 03:53 pm (UTC)I love your comments~ thank you so much hun <3 I know what I can do with them all now, especially Winter Dogs. I reread it myself today and felt it was a bit iffy, but couldn't quite pick why, so thanking you muchly =DD
*big scare as she's not used to LJ not working, kicks it*
...you~ lucky, lucky bastid!
Commodores are one of the most common cars in Australia, and if a car's really old and looking like it's about to blow up, we call it a bomb. People who don't like Commodores merge the two cos they're mean~ =( *has a Commodore* *called Bruce*
Aussies actually say sms? *fascinated*
We're kinda half-half. Text or sms, both work. I say sms, tho =3
Though bit odd to see you write something other than 'speculative fiction'.
It's even weirder WRITING it XD; I had to steal my own characters' names just so I had a bit of familiarity there ^^;
I'll get Mum to read Broken tomorrow, see how it goes down with no context. If not then I'll just scrap it. It's kinda there as a filler, cos I had two extra pages to fill (which amounts to about 500 words with the damn formatting they want) and just threw in that minific, cos I like hands~ >>;
Feel free to nick them both for Talechasing =D Broken was actually a response to something else a while ago, but there's no reason it can't go up at the comm =D
But yes, thank you soso much! I reckon I can fix all those bits now =3