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[annarti]

Look! It's a fic! Well, part of a fic. There's an intro that comes before that by Nol, and week one of the mission afterwards by Gylepi, but won't be puting them up for a while. Just wanted to stick 'may's bit up because I didn't realise until I started writing that her voice was so defined! I mean, I've never actually written her in the first person before--she obviously never has any dialogue, like Nol or virtually everyone else, so I didn't know how defined she was. As soon as I started writing, it was like I was just transcribing something she'd already written.

So yeah, very Nimay. Perfectly Nimay, even. I love that girl XD

edit = oh yeah, bit at the beginning translates to "My name is General Nimay, and I'm a rider for the King's Own." Nol translated that bit in the intro that I haven't posted, so there you go.

Comments

[drazzi.livejournal.com]

I just think it's really powerful hearing things in Nimay's "words" as it where...

[annarti.livejournal.com]

She's very insightful, really X3 Bit of a pitty I can't get her to "talk" more often XD;

[drazzi.livejournal.com]

It is, I like hearing things in her words =3

It was verra interesting, I liked it

[annarti.livejournal.com]

Thankuu very much hun, I always love getting your comments *^^* ♥

[garney.livejournal.com]

Oooohh very very nice =3

Flows very well it does, very deep and political but easy to understand

Good job!

[annarti.livejournal.com]

That's about as political as I can get, otherwise I won't understand what I'm on about =D;;

Yay~ Garney!approval =D *glomps* thankuu hun *^^*

[garney.livejournal.com]

She's a smurt girl, she should write more =3

Especially on matters of males XD

[annarti.livejournal.com]

*ded*